im not into spanking so meh, in that part. but god, i love zaza (i find the name so funny) and i love sophie. but i wanted to see them kiss more, like they so cute together
I was really hoping Marion to receive the mother of all spankings in the end, not just a single slap on the backside. Rather disappointing ending to say the least, but everything else is definitely a step up quality-wise from Grade-A Bully. The relationship is built up way better and the Chapter 2 spankings in particular shows a lot of promise.
Definitely would want to see more chubby butts getting swatted in the same vein, bonus points if they belong to snobbish older women like Marion.
I didn't enjoy the final chapter that much because the only spanking Zaza got was getting tortured by someone I dislike. I would like her getting spanked by Sophie in ch 3 because she actually cares for her.
Firstly awesome art. Thanks for this great game. We need more like it.
Second the ending was not up to the high standards of the rest.
Part is just I didn’t like the ending much. Part was that you made all kinds of intriguing plot promises up until this point. Some I liked and a few and didn’t care much for, but almost all were ignored, those story arcs cut short.
Finally I realize this was a very linear story, and I realize also that every branch increases your graphic design work by as much as 50%. However at least some choices would have been nice.
Finally I am trying to get a number of like minded game developers together to work on a VR game. Is that of interest to you? If so, let me know how I can get in touch.
The site didn't let me post my essay of a review in my rating. So, I'll post it in the comments instead...
3 STARS
This could have been a 5 star game, but the ending was rushed a many opportunities weren't pursued while dropping almost all of the fetish content that most people downloaded it for to begin with. To be blunt, the romance is bare bones. That's fine, if it's serving as a backdrop for the fetish content, but when that's no longer at the forefront it simply isn't enough to carry the game as a whole. While I would have LOVED a Bad Ending where the protagonist and all of her friends were stripped, spanked, diapered, pegged, broken, and enslaved with her romance still existing in a twisted form bonding over their mutually shared doom, that's a matter purely of taste. It would purely be a bonus anyways.
So, that and the fact that I personally would have loved to see some full on pornographic content are both not things that impact my scoring in this particular review. Rather, it is the missed opportunities that really hurt when the first two chapter's had set up both plot hooks for them and the expectation that we'd receive scenes to the degree of those chapters. I did believed in that potential to have become a Patreon subscriber.
Just going off of what I expected to see. I expected to see Zaza and Sophie to get a severe punishment after failing to defeat Marion, especially after the hilarious moment where Marion actually blocked the bullet. Then I expected to see Genie save them both by having Castyxo fight, defeat, and subsequently punish Marion with some combination of every punishment given to Zaza throughout the game as an epic finale. Instead, I got excited only to be denied.
The humor is great and the animations themselves are truly fantastic. Had the last chapter been at least in line with the quality of the others and still rushed the plot, I would have still rated the game 4 Stars. Because of those previous chapters and the lack of a price, I am rating it as 3 Stars, but the last chapter itself is just 1 Star.
You might be wondering why I mentioned that this could have been a 5 Star game at the start. Well, that comes down to the things that could have been done to exceed my expectations without even crossing the line into a full on pornographic game. I hesitate to cover the writing improvements that could be made, because I fear that your more interested in writing a romance than including the animations that I came here for, BUT if you have read this essay of a review all the way to this point, then I suppose I should start with opportunities you'd probably be more interested in.
For the theme of Magic VS Technology you had a good start with what you were setting up,
but you either didn't realize why that was the case or you just fumbled it at the end. When Zaza revealed at the start of the game that Marion is a highly respected mage despite it being considered a dying art, because she was such a skilled practitioner of the craft and followed it by Sophie making the argument that ANYONE could replicate a significant portion of Marion's abilities through technology, you had set up an excellent metaphor about the relationship between highly skilled labor that can only be done by an elite few with the education and resources for it and "good enough" products that allow common people to replicate those feats. You could have had it be reveal that Sophie's parents really did massively improve the life of many commoners in how they made their fortune, because there are only so many mages and all of them have to charge a high price for their services even their services are able to cover areas that technology alone cannot. That would add a much more interesting reason for Sophie's ego about her position and the technology she's associated with. Conversely, magic itself can be considered a good thing as well by showing, as you did in the ending, that there will always by some things you need a highly skilled specialist for. This and Zaza's sheer determination to learn to level at which her services could be worth riches despite literally coming from rags could have then reminded Sophie the reason she thinks technology is so great. That being that it enables even people like Zaza who have no resource and no skills, but are willing to suffer for their dreams. By embodying that Zaza could have gotten Sophie to have fallen for her beyond, "Oh look a girl I think is cute is getting spanked and I know that I can convince her to let me spank her too." The ending could have then (after all the fetish scenes that SHOULD have been there) been Zaza deciding to work with Sophie to invent Techno-Sorcery. It would have had an amazing moral about old art forms still being valid while also encouraging innovation not letting yourself be taken advantage of while pursuing your dreams.
Now onto the fetish stuff that would have gotten 5 Stars.
I would go into detail about all the pornographic and fetish content that I would have loved to have seen, but I doubt you are willing to get that lewd and this review is long enough anyways. Instead, I will compromise and list a few different kinky endings you could have had as "bad endings" in addition the the "True Ending," that I proposed where through the power of friendship they get Castyxo to completely dominate Marion and Zaza becomes a Techno-Mage.
1 Zaza decides to embrace Marion's teachings and decided that, actually, SHE should be the one bullying Sophie leading to her continuing the cycle of abuse while magically dominating Sophie.
2 Zaza decides to quit her dream and by into what Sophie said at the start of the game. This would lead to her either attempting to get revenge on Marion and failing leading to Zaza and Sophie getting dominated or with Sophie getting a small army of people to come with her leading to her defeating Marion, but never being truly happy knowing that she'll never achieve her dream.
3 Zaza caves to the pressure of both sides and asks Genie to help her make a deal with Castyxo that would let her take the quick and easy way out, despite Genie warning her that deal-making itself is an art form that one needs to be careful with and not rush into or else there could be significant consequences while rubbing her bottom. This would foreshadow Zaza messing up the ritual and/or deal getting herself enslaved to Castyxo as an eternal whipping girl.
I quite enjoyed this it was a fun story and the spanking was enjoyable. Was hoping there would be more spanking for the final chapter but it was still really good.
Side note I am curious if you have any plans to continue with your Grade-A Bully VN. I really enjoyed that one as well even though its a bit short.
Grade-A Bully is complete as it is. It was always meant to be a short little visual novel for me to learn the basics of making a game. I won't be adding any more to it, sorry!
So, this story is almost exclusively centered around spanking and has no player input at all.
There is a short moment which has some light foot fetish material.
The story is enjoyable, and at time arousing, but... it's just... the fact that there's no player input disappointed me.
I wish I knew that before downloading it... but I am interested in knowing where the story goes.
I hope Zaza ends up leaving Marion and gets together with Sophie. Marion is terrible, abusive, and takes advantage of Zaza. Genie literally used Zaza for her own needs without caring about how Zaza feels about it.
Sophie is the only one that has shown that she considers Zaza's emotions and considers her needs. Sophie is not without faults, but I believe she really cares about Zaza. They could have a healthy subbe/domme relationship with each other.
Genie could have a narrative redemption arc if she learns some sense of empathy after being forced to offer the tribute of pain to the demon... via a rough spanking through a wedgie.
However, if the only thing Genie learns from this is to make sure Zaza is nearby to get spanked when she summons the demon, then she's beyond redemption.
Overall this is an amazing story. The development of the Sophie character is top notch in chapter 2. The dialogue could be a bit more brief though. I wish the flashback scenes with Marion were longer and her character's motivations were more present. Hope to see more of Marion in the next chapter. The Genie plotline took an interesting twist. An idea for the next chapter is the demon kidnaps Genie and she gets saved by Zaza.
i can't believe how good is this. really wonderful. i rarely give money because i'm poor as zaza and can't even do spells, but you really deserve it. too great job.
i just hope to see soon updates and new project of yours. get used to this.. when someone become good to do these things everyone is always there on the door shouting "when next update?? when next update?? any other project??". i'm that everyone. and so... is there some prediction about when the next chapter will be released? (not the exact date, but something like in this year? before or after august?)
why don't you share your channel or novel on some other site? i suggest you animeOTK. a lot of people there would appreciate your works and maybe also reward you better than i can do.
love the animation, definitely a step up against other games there in the wild. looking forward to new chapters. you can also make a discord community for more inputs.
amazing look great story and cute interaction !!! promising is the biggest compliment i can give it especially seeing you want to make the third the final chapter, and i wish you luck on that and hope youll find a great way to close all of this up in a very cute and very hot way, im sure you will anyway!!
This is really a gem, great character design and a cute little story.
Going the extra mile and animating certain sequences puts this apart from a bunch of other stuff. But the spankings are of course the highlight, the jiggle is what we're here for, at least I am lol
You have done an amazing job with this game. I think you are a wonderful storyteller and look forward to next chapter and what will happen with all your characters
Finally found time to actually play this after downloading it a while ago, and WOW. I expected it to be good based off of the quality of your last game, but this really did blow me away. The animation quality has really surprised me, and I'm quite excited for the next chapter whenever it may come. Keep up the great work, Duckie!
Well you can't really call this a game... Also very disappointed that the first can makes splash the second doesn't.
Otherwise very well animated. I don't know if there being no sex is temporary or a rule to stay. Either way, neat little worldbuilding. The way the camera moves, the music and voiceless talks reminds me a lot of twilight princess. Anyway, well done.
I think this is a wonderful start to the game. The plot seems set up well and the spanking is top notch. I absolutely love the introduction to the villain girl and can't wait to see her lose, hopefully getting her own ass spanked too.
Felt a bit weird though, playing through the whole game without any choices in it though, but I get that its just the intro chapter for now.
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im not into spanking so meh, in that part. but god, i love zaza (i find the name so funny) and i love sophie. but i wanted to see them kiss more, like they so cute together
I was really hoping Marion to receive the mother of all spankings in the end, not just a single slap on the backside. Rather disappointing ending to say the least, but everything else is definitely a step up quality-wise from Grade-A Bully. The relationship is built up way better and the Chapter 2 spankings in particular shows a lot of promise.
Definitely would want to see more chubby butts getting swatted in the same vein, bonus points if they belong to snobbish older women like Marion.
I didn't enjoy the final chapter that much because the only spanking Zaza got was getting tortured by someone I dislike. I would like her getting spanked by Sophie in ch 3 because she actually cares for her.
Firstly awesome art. Thanks for this great game. We need more like it. Second the ending was not up to the high standards of the rest. Part is just I didn’t like the ending much. Part was that you made all kinds of intriguing plot promises up until this point. Some I liked and a few and didn’t care much for, but almost all were ignored, those story arcs cut short. Finally I realize this was a very linear story, and I realize also that every branch increases your graphic design work by as much as 50%. However at least some choices would have been nice.
Finally I am trying to get a number of like minded game developers together to work on a VR game. Is that of interest to you? If so, let me know how I can get in touch.
The site didn't let me post my essay of a review in my rating. So, I'll post it in the comments instead...
3 STARS This could have been a 5 star game, but the ending was rushed a many opportunities weren't pursued while dropping almost all of the fetish content that most people downloaded it for to begin with. To be blunt, the romance is bare bones. That's fine, if it's serving as a backdrop for the fetish content, but when that's no longer at the forefront it simply isn't enough to carry the game as a whole. While I would have LOVED a Bad Ending where the protagonist and all of her friends were stripped, spanked, diapered, pegged, broken, and enslaved with her romance still existing in a twisted form bonding over their mutually shared doom, that's a matter purely of taste. It would purely be a bonus anyways. So, that and the fact that I personally would have loved to see some full on pornographic content are both not things that impact my scoring in this particular review. Rather, it is the missed opportunities that really hurt when the first two chapter's had set up both plot hooks for them and the expectation that we'd receive scenes to the degree of those chapters. I did believed in that potential to have become a Patreon subscriber. Just going off of what I expected to see. I expected to see Zaza and Sophie to get a severe punishment after failing to defeat Marion, especially after the hilarious moment where Marion actually blocked the bullet. Then I expected to see Genie save them both by having Castyxo fight, defeat, and subsequently punish Marion with some combination of every punishment given to Zaza throughout the game as an epic finale. Instead, I got excited only to be denied. The humor is great and the animations themselves are truly fantastic. Had the last chapter been at least in line with the quality of the others and still rushed the plot, I would have still rated the game 4 Stars. Because of those previous chapters and the lack of a price, I am rating it as 3 Stars, but the last chapter itself is just 1 Star. You might be wondering why I mentioned that this could have been a 5 Star game at the start. Well, that comes down to the things that could have been done to exceed my expectations without even crossing the line into a full on pornographic game. I hesitate to cover the writing improvements that could be made, because I fear that your more interested in writing a romance than including the animations that I came here for, BUT if you have read this essay of a review all the way to this point, then I suppose I should start with opportunities you'd probably be more interested in. For the theme of Magic VS Technology you had a good start with what you were setting up, but you either didn't realize why that was the case or you just fumbled it at the end. When Zaza revealed at the start of the game that Marion is a highly respected mage despite it being considered a dying art, because she was such a skilled practitioner of the craft and followed it by Sophie making the argument that ANYONE could replicate a significant portion of Marion's abilities through technology, you had set up an excellent metaphor about the relationship between highly skilled labor that can only be done by an elite few with the education and resources for it and "good enough" products that allow common people to replicate those feats. You could have had it be reveal that Sophie's parents really did massively improve the life of many commoners in how they made their fortune, because there are only so many mages and all of them have to charge a high price for their services even their services are able to cover areas that technology alone cannot. That would add a much more interesting reason for Sophie's ego about her position and the technology she's associated with. Conversely, magic itself can be considered a good thing as well by showing, as you did in the ending, that there will always by some things you need a highly skilled specialist for. This and Zaza's sheer determination to learn to level at which her services could be worth riches despite literally coming from rags could have then reminded Sophie the reason she thinks technology is so great. That being that it enables even people like Zaza who have no resource and no skills, but are willing to suffer for their dreams. By embodying that Zaza could have gotten Sophie to have fallen for her beyond, "Oh look a girl I think is cute is getting spanked and I know that I can convince her to let me spank her too." The ending could have then (after all the fetish scenes that SHOULD have been there) been Zaza deciding to work with Sophie to invent Techno-Sorcery. It would have had an amazing moral about old art forms still being valid while also encouraging innovation not letting yourself be taken advantage of while pursuing your dreams. Now onto the fetish stuff that would have gotten 5 Stars. I would go into detail about all the pornographic and fetish content that I would have loved to have seen, but I doubt you are willing to get that lewd and this review is long enough anyways. Instead, I will compromise and list a few different kinky endings you could have had as "bad endings" in addition the the "True Ending," that I proposed where through the power of friendship they get Castyxo to completely dominate Marion and Zaza becomes a Techno-Mage. 1 Zaza decides to embrace Marion's teachings and decided that, actually, SHE should be the one bullying Sophie leading to her continuing the cycle of abuse while magically dominating Sophie. 2 Zaza decides to quit her dream and by into what Sophie said at the start of the game. This would lead to her either attempting to get revenge on Marion and failing leading to Zaza and Sophie getting dominated or with Sophie getting a small army of people to come with her leading to her defeating Marion, but never being truly happy knowing that she'll never achieve her dream. 3 Zaza caves to the pressure of both sides and asks Genie to help her make a deal with Castyxo that would let her take the quick and easy way out, despite Genie warning her that deal-making itself is an art form that one needs to be careful with and not rush into or else there could be significant consequences while rubbing her bottom. This would foreshadow Zaza messing up the ritual and/or deal getting herself enslaved to Castyxo as an eternal whipping girl.
don't know if anyone mention it before, just it bother me
a gun don't work like that, so no doubt that Sophie is a mage
or this gun producted by Aperture Science. GlaDOS would use this lol
the story was very good and so was the animation
I quite enjoyed this it was a fun story and the spanking was enjoyable. Was hoping there would be more spanking for the final chapter but it was still really good.
Side note I am curious if you have any plans to continue with your Grade-A Bully VN. I really enjoyed that one as well even though its a bit short.
Grade-A Bully is complete as it is. It was always meant to be a short little visual novel for me to learn the basics of making a game. I won't be adding any more to it, sorry!
That's disappointing but I'm looking forward to your future games.
I like the animation in the game and also the story too but they are no sex animation into the game I disappointed and only torturing zaza 8/10 rating
can we count on an update someday?
boom, update
So, this story is almost exclusively centered around spanking and has no player input at all.
There is a short moment which has some light foot fetish material.
The story is enjoyable, and at time arousing, but... it's just... the fact that there's no player input disappointed me.
I wish I knew that before downloading it... but I am interested in knowing where the story goes.
I hope Zaza ends up leaving Marion and gets together with Sophie. Marion is terrible, abusive, and takes advantage of Zaza. Genie literally used Zaza for her own needs without caring about how Zaza feels about it.
Sophie is the only one that has shown that she considers Zaza's emotions and considers her needs. Sophie is not without faults, but I believe she really cares about Zaza. They could have a healthy subbe/domme relationship with each other.
Addendum:
Genie could have a narrative redemption arc if she learns some sense of empathy after being forced to offer the tribute of pain to the demon... via a rough spanking through a wedgie.
However, if the only thing Genie learns from this is to make sure Zaza is nearby to get spanked when she summons the demon, then she's beyond redemption.
I can't believe we get to play as a girl called weed <3
Can Chinese be added later
Overall this is an amazing story. The development of the Sophie character is top notch in chapter 2. The dialogue could be a bit more brief though. I wish the flashback scenes with Marion were longer and her character's motivations were more present. Hope to see more of Marion in the next chapter. The Genie plotline took an interesting twist. An idea for the next chapter is the demon kidnaps Genie and she gets saved by Zaza.
OH - MY - GOD!
i can't believe how good is this. really wonderful. i rarely give money because i'm poor as zaza and can't even do spells, but you really deserve it. too great job.
i just hope to see soon updates and new project of yours. get used to this.. when someone become good to do these things everyone is always there on the door shouting "when next update?? when next update?? any other project??". i'm that everyone. and so... is there some prediction about when the next chapter will be released? (not the exact date, but something like in this year? before or after august?)
why don't you share your channel or novel on some other site? i suggest you animeOTK. a lot of people there would appreciate your works and maybe also reward you better than i can do.
Wow actually animation in a porn game first time for everything I guess this shit rocks.
love the animation, definitely a step up against other games there in the wild. looking forward to new chapters. you can also make a discord community for more inputs.
amazing look great story and cute interaction !!! promising is the biggest compliment i can give it especially seeing you want to make the third the final chapter, and i wish you luck on that and hope youll find a great way to close all of this up in a very cute and very hot way, im sure you will anyway!!
This is really a gem, great character design and a cute little story.
Going the extra mile and animating certain sequences puts this apart from a bunch of other stuff. But the spankings are of course the highlight, the jiggle is what we're here for, at least I am lol
Looking forward to the next chapter.
You have done an amazing job with this game. I think you are a wonderful storyteller and look forward to next chapter and what will happen with all your characters
Finally found time to actually play this after downloading it a while ago, and WOW. I expected it to be good based off of the quality of your last game, but this really did blow me away. The animation quality has really surprised me, and I'm quite excited for the next chapter whenever it may come. Keep up the great work, Duckie!
Well you can't really call this a game... Also very disappointed that the first can makes splash the second doesn't.
Otherwise very well animated. I don't know if there being no sex is temporary or a rule to stay. Either way, neat little worldbuilding. The way the camera moves, the music and voiceless talks reminds me a lot of twilight princess. Anyway, well done.
that lmaooo butt slap was god likes!
Excelent art style and animation!!! This game is like a movie 👏👏👏
I think this is a wonderful start to the game. The plot seems set up well and the spanking is top notch. I absolutely love the introduction to the villain girl and can't wait to see her lose, hopefully getting her own ass spanked too.
Felt a bit weird though, playing through the whole game without any choices in it though, but I get that its just the intro chapter for now.
She be thicc. Good reason for spanking.
The hell!? I only finished your first game 2 days ago and now suddenly you dropped a new one! Wow
little mage big spanking
just played it, was great, cant wait for more, and cute feet shots
need to play street fighter if like feet so much